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Last Post 07-23-2009 06:29 AM by BenFenner. 13 Replies.
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06-11-2009 12:07 PM  
I was reading through a bunch of articles (so happy to see them hosted again here) and found some errors. Should I point them out, and if so, to whom? I can just put them in this thread as I (and others) find them.
Yes/No?
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06-11-2009 04:35 PM  
To me, mike@motoiq.com and I'll fix them.

Thanks for helping us make things better.

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06-17-2009 02:14 PM  
Careful, Mike, your inbox will be flooded the way you spell!

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06-18-2009 11:55 AM  
Mike, forgive me for putting corrections here instead of e-mailing them. I don't have access to e-mail throughout most of the day and this is a better place for me. If you'd like it better, I could PM them, or if you insist, I'll e-mail them (that will just be very inconvenient for me).

In the "Building the Bulletproof Transmission, Secrets of the Pros" article, you have this on page 4.

On the B15 transmission, the reverse idler gear stays meshed with the main shaft and rides in bearings on a thick shaft supported on both ends. The gear helps prevent the main shaft from moving. On an older Sentra tranny the reverse gear idler is not engaged unless the car is in reverse and the idler is a wimpy thing supported only on one end. It has no support function at all.


Link: <a href="http://www.motoiq.com/MagazineArticles/tabid/59/articleType/ArticleView/articleId/839/PageID/932/Building-the-Bulletproof-Transmission-Secrets-of-the-Pros.aspx">www.motoiq.com/MagazineArticles/tab...-Pros.aspx</a>

I've put in bold the incorrect information. Everything else is factual.
The shaft that holds the reverse idler gear in place is obviously supported on one end where it has the notch taken out of it. The other end is supported by a provision in the transmission case easily seen in this picture: <img src='http://motoiq.smugmug.com/photos/525110953_xfb5X-M.jpg' />
It is directly to the right of the opening for the counter shaft bearing.

Not a typo or grammatical issue, I know. But something I thought needed correcting anyway.
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06-18-2009 02:46 PM  
I was talking about the wimpy C shaped thing that moves the gear/shaft having no support function but I screwed it all up and it doesnt make any sence. I'll fix it, thanks!
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06-20-2009 04:59 AM  
The lobster claw? Yah, when I first saw it I thought it was a joke and I was missing pieces. =D
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07-21-2009 04:09 AM  
www.motoiq.com/MagazineArticles/tab...Glory.aspx

First sentence after the opening picture.
"Glroy"
I don't think it was on purpose.
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07-21-2009 04:36 AM  
www.motoiq.com/MagazineArticles/tab...Rally.aspx

Rally Lesion number 8- Know when to quit.


Again, probably not on purpose?
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07-21-2009 04:41 AM  
www.motoiq.com/MagazineArticles/tab...nning.aspx

Second sentence in article.
Hyundai Motors also put the title Genesis on their new sports coupe, a car that is obviously intended to announce that Hyundai has set out to break there stereotypical mold as a manufacturer of price point leading, inexpensive, value oriented cars.
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07-21-2009 07:49 AM  
Got it!
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07-21-2009 07:56 AM  
After rechecking it the original spelling of "their" in the story is correct as it shows possession not position.
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07-21-2009 11:14 AM  
Mike, the original text said "there" and I made that bold. If, by the time you went to go correct it, it was changed to "their" then someone else is editing the pages without you knowing. =]

Edit: Also, as of 4:19 pm. EST the three errors I listed above are still present (even after refreshing the pages).

Edit 2: Just realized all the links above were broken. They should be fixed now.
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07-22-2009 12:54 PM  
Dude just pm him.
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07-23-2009 06:29 AM  
Good idea Benito, I'll do just that.
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